Who Am I?

7 Comments

Who Am I?

Staring at the emptyness deep within my eyes,
A stranger in the mirror dressed in disquise.
A happy little girl waiting to re-appear from where?

A tangled up mess intertwined within,
The blameless and regret for unforgivable sin...
A prayer of care to the man upstairs,

Hoping that soon this pain I can bare...
Tears of blood and steel flow from the heart,
All I really wanna do is rip my head apart!

Chemicals explode all over in my body,
Confused of why anyone even takes the time to talk to me!

Knowledge of life and knives thrown deep in my back,
Strength that God gave me to handle all that.

Peace of beleif and acceptance of all these facts...
Stability of light within my deep dark empty eyes,
              That IS: WHO AM I?  

Poem Comments

(7)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

BlackButterfly1 commented on Who Am I?

11-02-2010

Ahhh.. damn u mirror. I commend you for taking the time to look within and embracing all of who you are. We all have good and we all have bad. Embracing both is what makes us complete and aware. You've mastered something many are too terrified to do so I think you should add courageous to your list of adjectives. Well written fellow poet.

MarionYost commented on Who Am I?

09-16-2010

THIS IS AWESOME I love it! 10. You're right, We do have very similar views. Great write! All the best -Marion-

Charlie23 commented on Who Am I?

06-23-2010

Your awesome! I love this poem - that's who I am too! Except I curse the man upstairs for the strength he has blessed me with... I imagine you probably do at times as well. Awesome poem!

Qualin commented on Who Am I?

06-16-2010

LOOK DOWN AT YOUR TWO FEET....AND EXAMINE THE DIRECTION ...THEY WILL TAKE YOU WHERE YOUR HEART DESIRES...IF YOU USE GOD AS THE MAP MAKER....A FRIEND QUALIN

sammia commented on Who Am I?

05-24-2010

Peace of belief and acceptance of all these facts...Stability of light within my deep dark empty eyes, This is my favorite line of this. I agree with Dumdumdj below me. Great job

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Worthless’s Poems (107)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Screw you ju-LIE 0
Blessed be the Dead... 0
Silent words slowly heard.... 0
Fuck you satan!!! 0
Wake up Sunshine... 0
God has a plan.... 0
Unscrambled word pool... 0
Here we go again.... 1
Call me please???? 0
Your dancing a path to my heart... 0
Will you be my valentine?? 0
Words... 0
A game of hide and seek... 2
Last Breath 0
Justice system, My A$$.... 1
Satans slave 0
Dear Daughter, My Sweet Princess... 0
Is there really hope??? 1
Dear Heavenly Father.... 0
Deep in the depths of hell... 0
Waiting in torture for you to call.... 0
I dont understand...
.
0
Children.... 0
Butterflies in the sky... 0
Fire ant on Rampage... 0
Grocery store Hottie... 0
LORD, I NEED YOU!!!!!! 1
Young Love 0
I Barely Know You... 1
missing you today, tomorrow and forever... 0
HOME SWEET HOME 6
Faithful Mysteries... 3
A Nightmare without a Care... 3
A CURSE FROM HELL.... 2
I HATE COMPUTERS 0
Satans Game of Pain... 1
TODAY AND ALWAYS 2
I sit here and wait 5
mother nature 2
I MISS MY FRIEND! (read again & read between the lines last) 2
I Need a Good Nights Rest... 1
Now I know my A,B,C's!!! 3
Love Life.. (Short Story) 1
hmmm 0
Mystery Man... 3
The Empty Closet 2
Death And Life Combined 0
He's playing games with me! 0
Pen and Paper 4
MEN AND B(*)(*)BIES??
???
4
Men 4
HANG WITH ME 1
Humans.. 1
I Got A Feeling... 1
Go To Bed My Ugly Friend.. 1
A Father's Voice 2
Love Does NOT EXIST 1
HELL 4
Help Me 10
High On Lies 6
I Hate You Luke 5
Connect the Tears 1
Blood Tears 1
Disappearing Memory 2
Forclosure 4
Mouse Hunting 4
Nothing Left 3
I wanna... 2
30 Minute Meal 3
So, Folks 2
This Hill I stumble upon... 2
STRENGTH 9
I LOVE... 4
Feelings of Imagination and truth... 2
Who Am I? 7
I Don't have time 2
Dear Mr. President 4
STAB ME In the HEART PLEASE! 2
LONG AND DRAWN OUT 0
Girly Girl... 1
A Seed in Bloom... 0
Deathly Pissed... 0
Life 2
Is this what you call a home? 2
Love is fake? 2
March 27... 1
FAT & UGLY!!! 3
Loving You Still? 4
Opening Day... 1
My sister and Me... 6
Boyfriend Lies? 0
What do you care what's wrong with me? 2
Tied to the sheets that make me bleed... 4
What do I do? You leave me so confused... 0
The Love of A Child... 4
Sleep Tight... 1
Letter to You, Not knowing who... 1
Kids... 1
I GIVE UP!!!! 5
A love that ain't there 1
A new lust, not love... 1
Is there anything you need today? 1
JOBS (NOT FOR ME APPARENTLY) 3
Never Enuf 1
Real Man 2
God is Here 2
Worthless 4