Who Am I??

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Who Am I??

I am an accident
awaiting to happen

I am a death trap
about to snap

I am that unfinished
molded piece of clay

I am the one who doesn’t
go out to play

I am that girl that keeps
her obsessions under parole

I am that girl that never makes
a confession about an obsession

I am that girl that’s
vertically challenged

I am that blonde that trips
over her own two feet

I am that girl in which laughing at herself
comes with no obstacle

I am the student in which
once in a while
the right answers meet

I am captain obvious
but miss oblivious

I am that abnormal teenager
who doesn’t loathe Shakespeare

I am the one that never sheds a tear
and definitely not in fear

I am the one whose
friend is silence

I am the one that both
bores it and adores it

I am that girl who prefers
to be by herself

I am that girl whose still not sure
exactly who she wants to be

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Musicmynded1 commented on Who Am I??

04-01-2010

Really very well thought and put Bio.. i liked it..................:)

SmallFrie

04/01/2010

Thank you very much!!

Kaiprin commented on Who Am I??

12-02-2009

I like the introversion of this one. It's candid, yet wrapped in so many questions about self, influence, and where those can lead.

SmallFrie

12/02/2009

Thank You!!

DeepEclipse commented on Who Am I??

11-30-2009

[I am captain obvious but miss oblivious] -- ah I like how you worded this. Two sides of one coin. [I am the one whose friend is silence] -- hell yeah. Silence judges none. It lets you be. Some would say it leads to madness, but there are perks to madness....:P Enjoyed this read. Was like you were staring at the mirror shouting out your truths to yourself.

SmallFrie

11/30/2009

lol...thanks again!...although the one downfall to silence is that it can be easily misread...one of my recently favorite quotation is "Silence is like a text, easy to misread." (author unknown)...

SeanQuigley commented on Who Am I??

11-23-2009

Very awsome poem. Real.Honest,flows nicely i dig it

SmallFrie

11/23/2009

Thank You so much!! I'm never really sure what to think of my poems...they always seem extremely amature...it's encouraging to hear someone likes it.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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