WHO I AM

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  • Sadness

    WHO I AM
    When you feel alone
    think of me '

    The one who made you

    feel comfort and helpfull

    more than all can be

    The pain I carrie
    The hurt inside
    all I do is cry, cry cry
    you don't even know,
    why?????????????
    so I say, NO! I CAN'T
    IT HURT TOO BAD 
    you treated me so bad



     8-17-2005
    LYDIA GOODWIN

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    mithus commented on WHO I AM

    04-26-2009

    I have read 5 of your poems, and they mean something....so why don't you check them before you send them????Your typing grammer is horrid....Please, Please,,,and I say this because I can feel what you write,,,it is beautiful,,,,just check your spelling before you post it
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    Lydia

    11/16/2009

    ty

    ccslim commented on WHO I AM

    03-08-2009

    Owy I felt that! Sweet job Sis! Touching that which left me long ago. I sense the poem needs something more tho!
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    Lydia

    11/16/2009

    i thoughts so too

    blurocket commented on WHO I AM

    03-07-2009

    your poem is raw and pure. I am sorry for the pain you have endured. With all respect.
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    Lydia

    11/16/2009

    wow that was tight ty

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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