Who's Kissing Her Now

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    Thanks Mrgee for this grand opening line...........Lucky62

    Who's Kissing Her Now

    I wonder who's kissing her now, is he wonderful like me.
    Does he know all those little secrets like me.
    I wonder if her lips quiver at the thought of him.
    Like so many times when she felt my touch.

    Does he hold her tight to ward off her fears.
    Does he whisper " I'm here it's all going to be alright."
    Does she have all she needs from him every night.
    I wonder if he makes you feel safe.

    I wonder who's kissing her now, does he know I still care.
    Maybe his love is deep, I wonder.
    Can he fill that void, calm your inner child.
    Does he love you like I once did.

    Find your path my love, learn to live.
    Think of me sometime, on your way to heaven.
    For you have, if nothing else, a love wandering around this earth.
    Carrying you in his broken heart.

    I wonder who's kissing her now............

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    freezspirit commented on Who's Kissing Her Now

    12-31-2010

    This is a most heart felt poem. This moved me to tears, written with so much love.

    photochick commented on Who's Kissing Her Now

    08-20-2009

    wow something all can relate to at some point in their lives if they have given love to someone and not received it back your talent just blows me away how you can form such beauty from a line given from another just fantastic work lucky so powerful and thought provoking would make a great song thats for sure

    lucky62

    08/20/2009

    Well I can always count on your wonderful view of my meager work thanks girl......

    janetdawson commented on Who's Kissing Her Now

    08-20-2009

    many wonder the same, i think we all sit and wonder about the what if's and the who's when it comes to past loves

    lucky62

    08/20/2009

    I wish my list wasn't so very long Ol' lucky can be hard to live with lol

    kochab commented on Who's Kissing Her Now

    08-20-2009

    wow that would be a shitty thing to have to wonder often...greatly constructed all together though lucky

    lucky62

    08/20/2009

    thanks Ko got a good 1st line for this one

    MrGee commented on Who's Kissing Her Now

    08-20-2009

    EXCELLENT! And to come up with a poem based on just one lineis quite impressive.

    lucky62

    08/20/2009

    thanks I will get the hang of this writing someday lol.......

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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