Why Abandon Me

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  • melanie23
  • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

Why Abandon Me

Why do I love you,

With all of my heart,

When being around you

Rips me apart?

          You can be so vicious,

          So cruel and unkind.

          So why do i stay?

          I must be losing my mind.

I live for a moment,

When you turn to me.

I hold my breath.

I need you to need me.

          Seeing you smile,

          Brightens the day.

          And when you hurt,

          I share the pain.

I know that you' ve told me,

But I still don't understand why.

Where did I screw up?

Now all I do is cry.

          It felt like i died,

          The day that you left.

          I don't know why it all changed.

          I want it to change back.

Tell me it's not to late.

Even if you have to lie, tell me there's hope.

Don't throw me to the wolves.

Please, don't leave me alone.

                                                                            

                                                                        

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TheAngelOfDeath commented on Why Abandon Me

08-26-2009

This is my favrite of your poems i have read so far. I am adding ti to my favorites.. Great job.. It deserves better than a 10.

Ray37342 commented on Why Abandon Me

08-20-2009

That sounds about like a poem that I had written to my ex, I understand those feelings all toooo well...

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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