Why can't I?

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  • Amber041792
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So I recently read a poem about being in love and how happy it makes that person and it made me realize that no matter how much I tell people I don't believe in love, I actually do and I want to be. I want to give my heart to something that will cherish it forever and actually be happy with that person. I've also realized that it's much harder then that and I've given up on love and I don't think I came get my hope back.

Why can't I?

On the outside, you see this immature jerk who is rude and insensitive, but on the inside I am crying out for you. Apart of me is just like every other girl, I want to be loved by the man she loves, wants to be everything everyone wants. Although I know who and what I am, it always seems like no one will ever truly love me for me. They won't be able to get pass the exterior to see the interior of me. I always say how gross love is, how I don't belive in it one bit, how nasty making love is, but I am actually crying out for that feeling, the feeling of love. I want to find someone that I can be happy with and not have a care in the world. I want someone to give my heart to and have them cherish it.  Why can't I find someone that will look at the inside instead of the outside? Why can't I find someone that will love me, all of me? On the outside I'm hard and unbearable, but on the inside I'm dying and there's no way to get it back to the way it was before...

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koolmom0 commented on Why can't I?

11-07-2010

You will find that special love someday and it will be wonderful. This is a lovely write. :)) Rita

Amber041792

11/07/2010

thank you very much:)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Amber041792’s Poems (95)

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Just you. 0
The beauty of life... 0
Catching your eye 0
A cracked heart 0
I love you 0
True happiness 0
Unplan things 1
Him 1
I will not wait! 0
Leave Old Friend 2
No or Go 0
Need to Meet 0
I wish for... 0
Life without you 0
Growing apart 0
Fly beautiful butterfly 0
Spring 0
Still in my thoughts and head. 0
Please Lord 0
What about me? 1
Mask 1
Take that risk 0
Decisions 0
The Silence 1
Did you ever think about....? 1
Risks and Being Okay 2
Take my life? 1
Will it happen? 0
Confession 0
Deep Dark Secret 3
Happiness? Not one bit... 0
Why can't I? 1
I'm yours.... 0
I'm afraid of being alone 0
Not close at all 1
The mirror never lies 3
I Need A Way 1
You're Perfection 0
For the night 1
Someone better for you 0
The way I am 0
New life 1
Don't leave 0
Good and bad 0
Life begins 2
At Peace 0
I did this 0
How could you? 2
A chance you passed 0
Story about a best friend 1
Just leave 0
New Chapter 1
Dreams 1
Worth loving 1
I can't believe 0
This feeling 2
Decisions 1
Birthday 0
Why can't you? 2
Earth 1
Stereotyping 1
'Encourage or nag' 1
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Change 1
Stronger 1
A dearest friend 2
Show me 1
Not like you 2
Smile 2
Parents 1
Unbroken heart 1
This desk 1
Time 1
Lucky 1
The Real World 1
The New Year 0
Moving on 0
Cherish 3
Look Into the Mirror 2
The future 0
Just tell me 0
Your loss 1
Thank You 0
Over you 0
Someone! 0
"Ships" 0
Because of You 1
Memories 1
Yes I do 0
Who? 0
Your my sunshine 0
I met you 1
Homeless 0
I got a friend 0
Nothing's there 1