Why Did This Happen To Me?

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Why Did This Happen To Me?

Why did this happen to me?

I've lost a friend.

He now hates me.

I was nice to him, he was nice to me.

Will he say hello or good-bye?

Why did this happen to me?

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SuperChick76 commented on Why Did This Happen To Me?

10-07-2009

Short and filled with despair. Nicely done. Maybe I would have gone a little into either what happened or how it makes you feel. But nicely done as it is.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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