why does she stay

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    • quise
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    i need her

    why does she stay

    why does she stay
          hes different from all the rest but hes still a man
    still chooses his boys befor her he wont even hold her hand
    still hurts her befor he loves her
    still doesnt appreciate this beautiful angel god sent him that walks on land
    but still she stays

    why does she stay
    hes a strong man outside but in hes soft as cotton
    the way he treats her is terrible just plain rotten
    he does everything he can to avoid her
    and they dont spend time often
    but still she stays

    why does she stay
    he wont even celebrate there anniversary with her
    he sees her as just another girl but to her hes her world
     she brought him a car for the anniversary and he got her nothing
    she just wants him to love her and thats what she deserves
    but still she stays

    why does she stay
    because she seen the good in him not what hes trying to be
    its the man deep inside hiding behind the boy she can see
    she can have any man in the world
    but hes the only man that makes her complete
    and still she stays 


    why does she stay
        she sees the lover threw the terrible hays
    he treats her cold but in him she sees the sun shine in him like may
    your lucky i love you is all she can say
    even when she caught him sleeping under another women
    all he could think is why does she stay
    -gods son

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    WhisperingWind commented on why does she stay

    06-27-2009

    Very much older than your short years...the flow is very nice, and such a strong show of one sided love. Great work!

    AmadeusEx commented on why does she stay

    06-27-2009

    this one is good, the womans viewpoint, the question men ask themselves when they see a great women taken by another man who doesnt deserve her...youre really good, your themes are strong, personal, well thought out....great work

    passionsdance commented on why does she stay

    06-27-2009

    I really liked this one . Women ... well good women are loyal no matter how badly they are treated , I just hope whoever this is written about wakes up one day to se what he truly has ... great poem as always

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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