WHY HE CRIED

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    • Enjoying my reality yet I'm still a dreamer

    WHY HE CRIED



    He would dream sometime of how life could be

    Through these eyes of mine if only you could see

    He cried for dreams he wished were real

    He cried for love and those he loved still

    For the time that was lost and never regained

    For those that he hurt he cried for their pain

    He cried for his God when he died on the cross

    For the life of the Son or Daughter he lost

    And your arrows that pierced me from both sides

    As I stood there unjustly crucified

    He cried sometimes for the sake of crying

    Many days of his life he cried about dying

    Not because of fear but his gift would be gone

    If he were to sing it would be his last song

    He cried for the past and all these years

    Gasping for air treading through tears

    Crying for misunderstandings that lead to misjudgement

    For when you thought the War was over but it really wasn't

    Hoping his rights over shadowed his wrongs

    Writing and defining his life in his songs

    Deep is his mind strong is his will

    With a handful of tears still able to feel

    For the world that would cry if they looked inside of me

    They'd know who I was and truly who I tried to be

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    ArizonaPlay commented on WHY HE CRIED

    07-28-2009

    well i have to say i am a non believer but I am very impressed by the way you can make a person feel real when they read your work well done....

    NitaBoo commented on WHY HE CRIED

    06-18-2009

    I love it....truly uplifting and enlightening...the imagery is bold and ultimately a job well done

    bforibus commented on WHY HE CRIED

    06-18-2009

    beautiful. at first you were losing me with the flow of it but im telling you you worked your way up to a masterpiece. great ending. very sincere and apprecative

    litldeer commented on WHY HE CRIED

    06-14-2009

    OMG another masterpiece. i am truly breathless. i am so glad i get to find and read true poetry on this site. i am so glad i stumbled upon you today. you write with such imagery and your formatting is amazing. great job. another 10

    MLynna commented on WHY HE CRIED

    06-11-2009

    Once again, your imagery is beautiful. The turns of phrase you use express exactly what you want to say and give the reader a crystal clear picture of emotion. :)

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