Why I hate you

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    Why I hate you

    Why do I bother?

    It’s not like you’ll change.

    There is no respect,

    So there can be no real love.

    Essentially I am in a one sided relationship.

     

    You do not love me.

    Say it.

    You do not care about me.

    Say it.

    You are empty inside.

     

    I hate that I gave you my heart.

    I hate that I have spent so many years

    Loving you, caring for you.

    Wasting myself on someone

    Who loves only himself.

     

    You never loved me.

    Say it.

    You never cared about me.

    Say it.

    I am empty inside.

     

    I let this, this thing go too far.

    Allowing you to take and take.

    Making excuses as I gave and gave.

    Burying the hurt when you gave nothing back.

    Convincing myself it was me not you.

     

    You can not love.

    Say it.

    You can not care.

    Say it.

    Our life is empty.

     

    You’re anger has done this to us.

    You’re blatant disregard for my feelings.

    Your lack of apathy for what remains

    Of you and me is the ending

    Of what once might have been beautiful.

     

    I do not love you.

    Hear me.

    I do not care about you.

    Hear me.

    Here I leave you, as you left me,

    empty.

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    brokenhearted11 commented on Why I hate you

    07-06-2010

    i love it! seriously, its great. i can see the harshness, the openness, the emotion, building up, then with the last repetition, breaking through the dam nd flowing freely ! :) keep writing :) 10

    freind commented on Why I hate you

    02-28-2010

    hell all i can say girl is that you cut straight to the quick. the just keep getting better.good job

    Artie commented on Why I hate you

    10-17-2009

    We have all fallen victim to someone taking advantage of us in some way. The real question is, why do we allow it to happen? I like this piece.

    1990lh commented on Why I hate you

    09-29-2009

    great write i reslly like this i love the ending you r the one in control great job. nice one

    CMarsh commented on Why I hate you

    09-29-2009

    Wow! I can relate but from a male point of view, nicely done and nice flow.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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