Why Not Spend A Fantasy On Me

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    A poem from the college days... Playful, sensual lyrics

    Why Not Spend A Fantasy On Me


     Dance on moonlight beams

    Float amongst cloudy dreams


           Experience emotions on motions of waves

           Delve into sensuality in dark driven caves


    Feel warmth on pillows of snow

    Be caressed on a star reflecting a glow


           Make love swimming the oceans floor

           Lie naked at heavens door


    Pounce and ponder in leaves of silk

    Bathe with gold that flows as rivers milk


           Dry on flowers of lace

           Fantasize as feathers and fur tickle your face


    See whispering blue winds drop silver from the sky

    Drink from angels wings and fly on an ethereal high


           Soar into the greatest realms unseen

           Dive inside waterfalls of red, yellow, and green


    Taste the colors and spew out beauty

    Paint a tender picture of a calm crystal sea


           Now relax, behold and grasp all of life’s treasure

           You have felt feelings that travel beyond pleasure


    Be still, lie quiet before you wake

    There is one wish I would like to make


           That you would spend a fantasy on me

           And that together we might make the impossible a reality

     

     

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    SuSpence commented on Why Not Spend A Fantasy On Me

    05-04-2010

    Wow this is such a sensually lyrical piece soulwriter, so well written. Many good lines in here, all of them really. Memorable. Thanks for sharing! -Spence

    soulwriter

    05/04/2010

    Thank you my friend - so grateful that you found the memorable meaning that was intended!

    Rhymer commented on Why Not Spend A Fantasy On Me

    05-04-2010

    Enjoyed this descriptive and well written poem from start to finish. TY for taking me on this visual journey,

    soulwriter

    05/04/2010

    What a surprise to have this poem take life again... it has been a couple of decades since this was first penned.... I have changed in many ways, married - have a beautiful daughter - and since divorced. In many ways my written voice has changed too, so thank you so much for reading and commenting!

    1990lh commented on Why Not Spend A Fantasy On Me

    05-04-2010

    this was excellent, so wonder and smooth. i love the flow great job.

    soulwriter

    05/04/2010

    I am privileged that you read this and too that you find it to your taste... thank you!

    stellar commented on Why Not Spend A Fantasy On Me

    10-15-2009

    This poem takes me to the air! I'm completely floating

    soulwriter

    10/16/2009

    I wrote this so long ago - almost seems like a life time ago and a few loves ago, though I still love to write and I will never lose my playfulness or love for words.

    jferclark commented on Why Not Spend A Fantasy On Me

    09-09-2009

    My first time reading your work and this is amazing, I actually could "taste the colors". Can't wait to read more. --JEN

    soulwriter

    09/09/2009

    Thank you thank you my new friend, I will certainly visit your written voice to be just as amazed I'm sure!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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