Why Open My Eyes?

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    Why Open My Eyes?

    There are lights I see...some are flickering...some are blinking...but they're never stable.....
    But other than that...my vision is clouded by a dense fog...
    Then again, I've yet to feel the warmth of the sun shining on my face...yearn to be blinded by the shining light...
    Will a light ever blind me the way it was blinded before?
    Sublime and magnificent...all hopes of finding this one slowly fades...
    Hard to find this light these days...
    Hard to open my eyes and grope in the dark, musky,dense fog...
    Why should I open my eyes..when all I could see is this?
    Why should I open my eyes when all is dark?
    Might as well have it shut when I see the same thing even when it's opened....
    Unless I feel & recognize a warmth coming from a strong undying radiance....I would welcome it...in a heart beat!

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    DeepEclipse commented on Why Open My Eyes?

    03-15-2010

    Nice. Not totally overcome, just maybe overwhelmed. Still hoping to see. Just at the moment, seeing pitch black. Ironic how appreciation comes that much stronger when light hits eyes that have been darkened for so long. Like being starved, then coming across food. Well written.
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    lonewolf commented on Why Open My Eyes?

    12-13-2009

    feel the sun with your heart and mind wide open. be a reflection of that sun, and soon you will be engulfed in its warmth. nicely done.
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    Kaiprin commented on Why Open My Eyes?

    12-06-2009

    How touching. I'm sure sunlight is just around the corner if you're willing to believe and go forward.
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    DarkChi commented on Why Open My Eyes?

    10-08-2009

    sun? i don't like the sun. i love the moon light. i can see just fine with it. the sun may be warm but the moon is beautiful
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    KagenoKitsune commented on Why Open My Eyes?

    10-08-2009

    i made friends with the dark, and i find my way with my minds eye, as it never leads me astray...
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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