WHY?
WHY?
The fire burns,
burns deep in the skin,
unable to stop or spread.
You're causing it.
Well thanks,
so sure it would not end.
This way
never whole again,
scarred for life
just because we weren't friends.
WHY?
37 Comments
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- spazmsg
- is Thinking about all the good things in life.
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This is the first poem that I got published. So your feedback is great. I'm putting together a book, all poems. So if interested let me know.
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alphavoiceovers commented on WHY?
04-05-2010
- Its not easy for me to criticise because of poetic license... so sometimes its the authors right to say it as he or she wants. Yours is a new take and I find it interesting.
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10-18-2009
- Think sour milk - when the milk goes sour, toss it and get more milk. Don't put it back in the fridge and check later - it's still sour lol
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09-10-2009
- spaz, A very sad but often true sentiment. A universal question also...Why? Your first post is a fine and very emoting and curious choice! Keep 'em coming. ginga
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cottoncandi commented on WHY?
08-24-2009
- This is very good and very truthful ..............
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08-23-2009
- Put out the fire, don't be afraid, for if you never chance friendship again, you will never find passion. Trevon
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