The toile and trails you put me through

I thought you loved me

But you turned on me

Why lashed at my oh, humble soul?

Why was I the scape -goat of your furry?

Why was I the douer of all wrongs?

Why kick my already dead body?

Why stab me in my unbeatting heart?

Why kill my healing spirit?

Why yell,

Why scream,

Why beat,

Why bruise,

Why scorn, my mind

Why make me inferior?

Why make me less?

Why do you degrade my integrity?

Why defile humanity with your impulsiveness?

Why twist the truth?

Why me why not your own?

Why Wrong

Why right

Why you


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Platti commented on Why


...WOW...that was a very intense and heartfelt poem , very good job on this one



Thanks !! I am blushing know X03

Paige commented on Why


I totally connect with these feelings because of past experiences, but mine are probably less intense than the words used here. Totally love it!!



thanks thisd is about my going to be ex-step-father Thanks for the comment!!!!!!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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Put My Gloves Away 0
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