Why ?

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Why ?

I can't believe you would lie to me;
after all you knew I had been through,

You told me you loved me, and would always be there,
but now I know that's not true.

The pain you have caused me; the rage and despair;
Are just too much for, my heart to bear.

I trusted in you; and believed all your lies,
but now my heart is broken in two. 

For I loved and trusted you so completely;
and I just don't know what to do.

Why would you do this to some one you love;
some one you say you cared for;
Some one who loved you so completely;
that she would have given up everything.

But now it's finished; over and done; just as quickly as it began,
Because of the lies that you told; and the trust you betrayed,
All you left me was pain in the end.

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mustascheman commented on Why ?

12-30-2010

I won't even say anything about the content....the poem, as such, is very well written and intelligently constructed. This piece also has a smooth flow and transition from line to line. I shall have to read more to find out if your other poems have this same flow and intensity. Great job. A.T.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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