Wide Open

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A short little writing, I was experiencing huge surges of energy, had to get it out on paper....

Wide Open

I feel extra open
Extra-sensory
Energy pouring through me
Altering my consciousness
Every nerve is raw
And I can feel everything
I can't describe this
It frightens me
And elates me
All at once
Try to catch my breath
It keeps getting swept away
In this intense
Buzzing energy
That saturates me
And overtakes me
These patterns and shapes
Form in the air
As it changes color
And everything glows
I can see the Field
I am the Field

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DeepEclipse commented on Wide Open

07-15-2010

The brevity of the lines make it -feel- like energy. Quick hitting lines. [And I can feel everything I can't describe this It frightens me And elates me] - Was like seeing something extreme in sentience. Both freely flowing through the feeling and yet timid from the feel of so much power. Unexpectant of the results. Deep read showing perception through emotions. Enjoyed this.

optimistic commented on Wide Open

07-02-2009

I think this poem is great this is a field of excitment I felt the poem should have been some how slowed down for the reader to enjoy your great words of excitment and see the changes of color and everything that glows, great poem.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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