Will This Once Upon A Time

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    Will This Once Upon A Time

    Will this once upon a time have a happily ever after?
    Is it fair to chase dreams that run alot faster?
    Is life just a book and we are living out it's pages?
    Or a dream in God's head as she sleeps through the ages,
    Is time just an illusion?
    Are we living with a purpose?
    Swimming in a sea of lies, will we ever reach the surface?
    Do we have a future?
    Will we really make it there?
    Whats the truth behind life?
    Can our minds take us there?
    So can you wrap your mind around that?
    Shake the fake why cant you face fact?
    You want to know answers but your afraid to ask,
    The world keeps sprinning life goes by fast,
    But you turn the other way and play your part,
    You let the lies and the pain tear at your heart,
    Saying your prayers in bed and sing you lullabies,
    You lay down your head and close your eyes,
    At peace while you sleep but it always starts again,
    No answers to your questions and the search begins....


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    Phission commented on Will This Once Upon A Time

    11-16-2011

    as i read this, i don't know why but i pictured this on a huge screen in times square, running over and over. thought provoking ! 10

    Logik

    11/16/2011

    lol thanks man I like the way you think

    Tempestlady commented on Will This Once Upon A Time

    09-21-2011

    The frustration and futility of life, put in such honest and placating words. Very engaging piece, makes you think thats for sure. Write on.................Tlady

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Will This Once Upon A Time

    09-13-2011

    I love the thought provoking questions in this piece. Great use of wording and flow........................E

    Insideme commented on Will This Once Upon A Time

    02-05-2011

    This is the most original piece I've read in a long time. Your use of common associations most,,,well I can speak only for myself, associations that I myself feel at home with. The questioning, the hope...so beautiful. You know its good when every line speaks to you.

    poeticmike commented on Will This Once Upon A Time

    02-05-2011

    Incredible imagination, truth, imagery, & beautiful descriptive flow.. Amazing poem Logik.....-Mike

    Logik

    02/05/2011

    thanks bro much appreciated

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Logik’s Poems (7)

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    Illuminatic Dreams 1
    Ordinance 2
    Writers Block 3
    Will This Once Upon A Time 5
    The Prayer 2
    The Garden Of Blue Roses 3
    Dirty Hands 3