Will you find that special song for me?

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    I play four instruments and music transports me. I love playing all my instruments but the piano is my favorite. So this poem was written with my piano in mind. Hope you enjoy it.

    Will you find that special song for me?

    A B C D E F G

    The musical alphabet sings a song to me

    As the sweet rhythm drowns out

    The patter of water drops down my cheek

    I hear those special songs calling out to me

    A song can reach out and grab you

    The pain, the happiness, laughter, tears, good, or bad

    It sings your emotions

    So will you find that special song for me?

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    kmooney commented on Will you find that special song for me?

    09-18-2009

    wonderful, whimsical piece my talented friend. I really enjoyed this. I can feel your musical passion. Keep 'em coming... Kevin...

    lsabeth commented on Will you find that special song for me?

    09-17-2009

    well, this is certainly the muse of a teenager. and what's with dorwns out? you need to use a dictionary before posting a word such as *drowns* there is No such word. And the verse that reads It sings your emotions I am not clear on what It is? You need to be more concise. and such bad grammar when u write So will you find its grammatically incorrect. And u wud do well to also get together with a thesaurus. and the verse that reads sins a song to me is redundant1

    EricaE

    09/18/2009

    English is not my first language so my writing will probably have error. The line about sings a song to me is referring to the notes every song comes from them and in turn so does every song. Just read the message I sent you

    MrGee commented on Will you find that special song for me?

    09-17-2009

    EXELLENT! the poem has great rhythmn and paints an excellent picture inthe readers mind. And i like the rhymn. For someone so young u show great potential. this poem is a definite 10 from me. Also I like that the poem is concise and not over wordy. Keep up the excellent work you have a great beginning. and also plz read my poem entitled Forlorn I wud appreciate it. Its concise, and is somewhat like the old tv version of The Twilight Zone

    EricaE

    09/17/2009

    WOW. Thanks, and ill read it.

    EricaE

    09/17/2009

    WOW. Thanks, and ill read it.

    parks commented on Will you find that special song for me?

    08-29-2009

    Just like music poetry has many rhythms. It pulses and bangs, it sweeps it climbs. It carries us with it to places sublime. It paces our time and records of thoughts, it reveals our self to our self. When poetry and music combine two worlds collide. I'm glad I collided with yours

    Rendida commented on Will you find that special song for me?

    08-17-2009

    it's Short but sweet ...I love music and all it entails...how it speaks to you is everyway... it obviously speaks to you to... cute poem..

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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