Will you go out with me?

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Will you go out with me?

I was once blind,
But now i see,
That the one person i was looking for,
Was always in front of me,
It took a semester  to realize,
That i need to look with my heart,
Instead of my eyes,
Because looks can be deceiving,
Most people as pretty as you,
Look down on people like me,
But i never really knew how awesome you could be,
Because i only saw your gorgeous face,
And not for who you are on the inside,
Which really matters in this type of case,
And now i know,
That you were there,
Which feels me with joy,
Because someone cares,
But now,
I have developed a deep affection, For you,
And i fall to temptation,
To ask you a question.
Will you go out with me? 

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EyesOfRain commented on Will you go out with me?

09-07-2012

This is very sweet and kindhearted! I like that it expressed real feelings and real emotions that people have every day but it still has the hope of things to come. Nice job!

farmermason

09/07/2012

Thank you (:

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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