Will you?

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  • Vampire6
  • Yes I'm a lesbian :) and proud. I forgive you for being so closed minded. :)

Poem Commentary

This poem is about my best friend as well as the person i'm in love with.

Will you?

Will you let me where your hoodie?

Will you cuddle me when its cold?

Will you wrap your arms around me

never intending to let go?

Will you miss me when I'm gone?

Will you catch me when i fall?

Will you be the one i can call on

whenever somethings wrong?

I want you to know I'm yours and

i want you to be mine,

Your the one that makes me laugh and

never makes me cry,
Your always on my mind, and 
you live inside my heart, 
You give me strength to keep on living,
and keep me from falling apart. 

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combatrider commented on Will you?

01-16-2013

You must enter a poem comment before you can rate this poem. All poem comments must be a minimum of 50 characters (not words). Now you know what it means to be greased.

baddreams commented on Will you?

01-09-2012

great love peom! and interesting hehehe i like the part will you catch me when i fail ^^

Vampire6

01/11/2012

Thanks haha :)

boomboom56 commented on Will you?

12-30-2011

sweet stuff and to the point. pretty loveee doveee for a vampire! keep writing with your heart young lady!

Vampire6

12/30/2011

Haha thanks and I will.

bets commented on Will you?

12-29-2011

This is a really amazing poem :) Great piece! Welcome to OP!

Vampire6

12/29/2011

Thank you so much :)

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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