Willingly Trapped

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I'm like dominoes....................I always deliver!

Willingly Trapped

It's POETIC JUSTICE how I SPEAK to your SPIRIT.

Fine Tuned my VOCAL CORDzzzzz,

To your BODIES accord,

So only you can HEAR IT? (listen)

Soft and Soothing so you won't FEAR IT, (Don't fear it baby)

My ELOQUENT LYRICS.

Begins to MESSAGE your SOUL in all the right PLACES.

(how does that feel baby!)

Physically your BODY starts to TREMBLE as my TONGUE

TRACES, (mmm)

And EROTIC PATTERN, (lick)

Down your EXOTIC PATTERN. (kiss)

To encounter your HIDDEN,

And most FORBIDDEN PLACES. (wow)

DAM I want a TASTE,

Of what's just below your WAIST?

But I cautiously HESITATE! (wait)

Because having my FACE,

Inbetween that very DELICTE PLACE.

Is like being LOCKED up STATE! (wait)

I'm HELPLESSLY TrAPPED?

But not by Concrete Walls or Gates,

I'm TrAPPED by DELICATE WALLS that change SHAPE?

SEDUCING me to WILLINGLY SUBMIT to my FORTUNATE FATE.

And never try to ESCAPE?

SO now BABY I've CONSCIOUSLY decided,

That once I ENTER.

I'm going to stay INSIDE IT!

For however long it TAKES,

to make your whole BODY SHIVER AND SHAKE. (mmmm)

Haki Natuwah

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jademelissa74 commented on Willingly Trapped

04-28-2010

Tsssssss....steaming HOT! A precised development of an erotica piece. The imagery indeed is vivid. Thanks for sharing!

JamilahAyanna commented on Willingly Trapped

10-21-2009

Wooooooow lol. Dat wuz hot, and u painted lyke da most vivid pictures in my mind and I wuz waitin 4 more when it hit da end lol but I loved it and da way u described e'ry motion in detail made dis poem incredible....

HakiNatuwah1

10/21/2009

Did it make your body shiver and shake...lol...I think that you might be ready for "Mind Sex"...^_^

JamilahAyanna

10/22/2009

lmao woooooow!

JamilahAyanna

10/22/2009

lmao woooooow!

JamilahAyanna

10/22/2009

lmao woooooow!

JamilahAyanna

10/22/2009

lmao woooooow ur crazii lol.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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