Wilted flower

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  • Devotion

    Wilted flower

    Your words fall down like rain
    on this wilted flower,
    the tenderness proclaim
    of your sensuous power.

    Lets the rains fall on me
    let it bathe me in your love,
    hold me in the silent nights
    with wings from above.

    My soul sits and waits for you
    a hundred thousand years,
    waiting to be released again
    from these many tears.

    What am I to do with
    such sweet despair,
    dare I even notice how
    much I really care?

    Hidden away like a present
    not to be opened at this hour,
    at the thought of losing you
    my heart begins to cower....

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    FLAWLES commented on Wilted flower

    02-20-2011

    Your flow was, right on time. I like this, very much. Once again oh, friend of mine, you've displayed a, tender touch.

    theguider commented on Wilted flower

    07-21-2009

    Thats it before you get me thinking........Whao that was a nice piece

    AsumngiDieAlone commented on Wilted flower

    07-14-2009

    wow, it's beautiful..... i've read some of your poems and i like them all a lot

    amysue201988 commented on Wilted flower

    07-09-2009

    Hello........you are very talented..........your words flow soo freely ..I can read them like I wrote them myself......smooth as butter........love it

    randomthoughts commented on Wilted flower

    05-18-2009

    Love it

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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