Wilted Love

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This was inspired by my own experience and also the daily poetry challenge on the boards! Thanks for the great inspiration!

Wilted Love

My love, alas our love has wilted.

The violin is playing a sad song

If only I didn't feel so jilted

Today we could be going strong.



The petals they have fallen

Upon the open ground

This pain it has befallen

And I'm afraid it can not be found.


One too many times
 
This hurt I have endured

It feels like I have committed many crimes

This feeling can not be cured.



If only I could show you

The bruises on my heart

You'd know that what I said was true

And give me a fresh start.



But until that day shall come

The petals they remain

And slowly I succumb

For never have I felt such pain.

 


 

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1990lh commented on Wilted Love

08-21-2009

ww that really deep and a little sad ful of so much emotion i really enjoyed reading this. great write

Alexia

10/13/2009

aww thank your sweet

jademelissa74 commented on Wilted Love

07-28-2009

Poetically rich. I love the passion in which you convey your loss. You manage to keep a level of interest. Great job Alexia!

Alexia

07/28/2009

Thank you as always your comments are too kind. I appreciate them all.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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