Wind/1

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    I wrote this while tring to submit a writing sample for a job app. from a list of subjects they provided. nuthin was jumpin out as I stared out the window. This acully happened, so I wrote about it and submitted this poem. one of the subjects was "about where you live" This fits, right? I got NO reply.

    Wind/1

    Can I write this instead?
    Things racing through my head.

    As I gaze out the window,
     it's raining in the sunshine.

    Dancing shadows on the carpet from trees blowing in the wind,
     a gust!, showers from the foliage like spilling diamonds glistening in the sun.

    Strong winds bending limbs.
    Fluttering leaves in the air, almost as abundant as the drops.

    Then, could it be? What do I see? A bug, a fly, a bee? A moth!!
    Struggling to steer, probably prayin' cover's near. He's headed for the glass.

    Perhaps he'll land upon the frame, not into the pane, the pain.
    Um, never mind, nuther gust! Wind won. Wind/1.

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    DavidRayy’s Poems (33)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Wind/1 0
    I WISH 1
    SPARKS 4
    MOISTENED SHEATH 9
    WANNA DO IT AGAIN?! 7
    JOY AND PAIN 5
    Happy? 6
    BIG RED 5
    'TIL I CAN SEARCH NO MORE 5
    DUST 6
    FORGIVE THEM FATHER(lyric) 2
    I SEE DEMONS(lyric, heavy metal) 4
    WTF....... (WHY THE FONIKS) 4
    THE SPRINKLING---
    03-04-09(L.U.
    K. 6)
    2
    YOU NEED TO KNOW SOMEONE(L.U.K
    . 5)
    4
    IN HIS EYES(L.U.K. 4) 0
    TO YOUR EAR(L.U.K. 3) 0
    (UNCLE KUNKEL(L.U.K. 2-LYRIC) 2
    T.T.A.T.I.A.(
    L.U.K. 1)
    0
    INTRO TO THE L.U.K. POEMS: 0
    LIFE 1
    I SET SAIL 2
    I'VE CONTEMPLATED 0
    RELATIONSHIPS 2
    ALL 1
    Toozda meet 1
    NOTE TO SELF 3
    I'M SO DAMN MAD 3
    (title below,wont fit here) 2
    A MAGICIAN WITH A PEN 3
    ? 2
    WHAT A TRIP 0
    JUST NOISE 4