Winged Chariots

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Winged Chariots

Merrily, merrily carols the wind.

Kiss sweet kisses upon my skin.

Jubilant fairies gamboling afar,

whispering secrets from mid-air.

O, listen, listen a harp golden;

the universal mysteries’ beholden.

Dancing gentle upon souls spawn.

breath, appease thy graceful swan

Fill my cup with thy beatitude.

Review our hearts and attitude

Compassion's lyric sing to thee,

heartsease derives our serenity.

Wind sing without subtlety,

embrace forthright sobriety.

Lend us wings to zoom spiritually,

and ride the chariots anagogically.

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wheelsal commented on Winged Chariots

08-03-2009

You are alive with words, music and rhyme. Great job. Sally

StandingBear commented on Winged Chariots

06-25-2009

A very nice, gentle freeflowing write. Definitely a feel good work. Great freeing of the mind to accomplish this masterpiece.

GentleT

06/26/2009

Thank you for your kind words.

Grito commented on Winged Chariots

06-23-2009

All is alive and positive in this land of the winged chariots!

GentleT

06/23/2009

thank you grito for reading and replying.

bandit1192 commented on Winged Chariots

06-20-2009

Well done. I don't wish to repeat what everyone else has said, but there is a wonderful flow to your poem. I think I've read it three times and it just gets better with each read. TS

GentleT

06/21/2009

How kind your comment is, thanks.

jademelissa74 commented on Winged Chariots

06-18-2009

A well-written poem. The arrangement of magnificent phrases into a masterpiece! A "must-read" poem!! Great job! A very inspirational and reflectory poem!

GentleT

06/18/2009

Humbly I thank you Jademelissa for your kind response.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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