Winter Rememberance

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Winter Rememberance

When autumn winds blow through me
And I am drawn back to a shining sea
Then
Dear winter shall I remember thee

When voices no longer sway me
And Reason no longer grips me
Then
Dear winter shall I be with thee

When all the sands I’ve clutched are set free
And I awash beneath that shining sea
Then
Dear winter shall you encompass me

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ginga commented on Winter Rememberance

11-30-2010

Winter on winter cannot get much better. I love the remembrance of the season repeated at the end of each stanza. ginga

soulwriter commented on Winter Rememberance

11-29-2010

This is as airy as a snowflake falling... I love a poem that offers comfort - a smooth flow.... 10 Soul

blackfootlady commented on Winter Rememberance

11-29-2010

Neat thoughts.Remarkable transformations.I really liked this.Thank You for sharing this with Me.Good Bless-Black

HarverTomsson commented on Winter Rememberance

11-29-2010

Wonderful ethos on the cycle of life, ending in a subtly played evocation of pathos. A great unspoken now playing off the footlighted then. Harv

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