Wishing Her Well

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Wishing Her Well


A penny for your thoughts she said

So I threw my coin into the well

I did not make a wish as it hit the water

I but marveled at the ripples that multiplied from the center

She saw the circles reflect back from the eyes of my heart

And before I could tell her my thoughts

She knew what we both had been thinking for too long

A bottomless pool filled with too many discarded tokens

As I watched her walk away I took the stone from my pocket

I threw it in just to feel it sink

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Maleficent commented on Wishing Her Well

05-28-2010

you've put a lot of vivid imagery and emotion into so few words... great write ;)

soulwriter

06/18/2010

Thank you once again for your emotional expression - I always appreciate your words.

Insideme commented on Wishing Her Well

05-19-2010

Im amazed at how beautifully simplistic and full of charm and meaning this is.

soulwriter

05/20/2010

It appears that you got my full intentions... I thank you for taking the time to experience.

Tempy commented on Wishing Her Well

05-14-2010

such an incredible write. I felt the sinking rock fall into my belly and make the sound of a drop in water wow well done

soulwriter

05/14/2010

Tempy I just knew that when you got time to read this that you would find favor with it - so happy that you found it... Thank you!

ginga commented on Wishing Her Well

05-02-2010

soul, The finery in this poem is the action of throwing the first coin. All the rest makes its point, and I am guessing when she walked away the stone was an object to release because you wished she stayed. ginga

soulwriter

05/03/2010

Yes, a poem with many meanings... I have been working on a short story about a girl and a wishing well for years and suddenly after coming across a picture I began to write this poem - it turns out that you has deep personal meaning, more so than when I knew of as I wrote it. Thank YOU

deanne commented on Wishing Her Well

04-30-2010

I like this piece, and I like your writing style. I think it's elegant, classic, soulful. This is brillant, touches the heart and is felt down in the soul.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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