Wishing Upon an Angel's Wing

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Wow. I can't believe that I had written something happy, for once.

Wishing Upon an Angel's Wing


Looking at the sky cerulean bright
A feather falls most pristine white
A feeling once forgotten quite
Unsettles my solemn heart.

Closing my eyes, I start to sing
This light is such a wondrous thing
Wishing upon an angel's wing
My darkness starts to depart.

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Franziska commented on Wishing Upon an Angel's Wing

10-16-2010

Wow, Smaffa this one didn't have death in it lol. Very nice and very touching. You should write more happy peaceful ones like this. You did a really good job.

smaffa

10/17/2010

Nah, that might ruin my rep as a POB. Lol, maybe....

EmoAlexis commented on Wishing Upon an Angel's Wing

09-22-2009

its good my friend. I think you still have that happiness, you just have to search.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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