With All Your Honesty

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    With All Your Honesty
    So you say that you care, that your gonna be there

    but the truth is so clear, that you don’t want me here.

    I am just another unnessesary distraction from your happy salvation

    You say that its not true but your eyes tell me it is

    You say you love me but your actions speak differently

    You tell me your sorry but your heart blames me

    Your bitter and cold, leaving me to rot with no hope that I will ever amount to what you want.

    Now that the truth has been told and I am left here to mold you are finally free to a happy life without me.

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    ChaoticStorm commented on With All Your Honesty

    06-27-2012

    This was product of some emotions I struggled with dealing with my mother. She was at the time very persistent on downing me and using the bible and her husband to do it. For a long time I could not forgive her, now however, we have spoken about her mistakes and mine as well. Slowly we are forming some kind of bond, but it is still very loose leaf. I have hopes it will get better in time.
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    poetheart87 commented on With All Your Honesty

    04-28-2010

    So sad and touching. Hopefully you find a love that is true. Keep on writing, you have wonderful strength.
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