With Love

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    With Love


    With Love

    She's seen him before but he never speaks,

    Always hidden in the shadows; but his smile makes her knees weak.

    She noticed he was watching her with hunger in his eyes,

    But he never approaches her; he just walks on by.

    Then it happened so quickly; but inside she just knew,

    The way her body reacted to his closeness,

    She now has to wonder; was it the same for you?

    I wanted you that night and I'm still unsure as to why,

    Your smile was so inviting, and you wore no disguise,

    You were just yourself so real from the start,

    You weren't trying to play games, or out to break my heart.

    Now we both want to keep it casual; and just enjoy each other for a while,

    And so far it seems to be working, and I enjoy your touch, your company, your smile.

    I have to tell you; your kisses leave me longing, and your touch drives me insane,

    I find I'm thinking of you often, you're even in my dreams.

    You know it seems to find you when you least expect it,

    A new friendship can develop if we just let it,

    As your friend there's a joy in my heart I wouldn't hesitate to share,

    And there's nothing I wouldn't do for you, for I'm a friend that truly cares.

    You know there's no denying the physical attraction, but I want to know you more,

    But on another level, an intellectual one, cause I know with you there's much more in store.

    With Love Bree 12.5.05

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    EyesOfRain commented on With Love

    09-07-2012

    WOW! I love this so much! This is EXACTLY how I felt when I met my guy, and your way of explaining it all hit the nail on the head. Perfect composition. It's amazing because I remember when I met him he literally told me that he wanted to "get to know me more". When I read that last paragraph my heart started smiling as you brought back that memory for me. Thank you so much for sharing this... and I'm glad you have found someone who makes you feel this way too. Best of Luck to you!

    BreeLove

    09/10/2012

    thank you for taking the time to read and comment, I am happy this brought back fond memories for you, it was an old write i happened to share, so unfortunately this love has come and gone, but live learn, and move on. Bree

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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