With You


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Well i wrote a peom for my best friend to give to her boyfriend and this is waht it came out to

With You


baby when im with u,it seems 2 good 2 be true

baby i never knew,i could feel the way i do

im making myself a promise

im never letting u go

u might already know

but ur the only thing thats on my mind,all the time

Im so glad i can call you mine


baby when im with u, It feels so amazing

I can feel my heart beat raising

Each time we touch, Each time we kiss

I could make a whole list

But it would be too much

So this is what im trying to say

baby when im with you..

Each and every day

The only think I knowIm just so in love with you

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angelchaser commented on With You


This is a very touching poem you've written, girls grasp passion so much earlier than guys do, I could never have written something like this as a teenager. Nicely done, I'll be reading more of your work.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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