Within The Moment

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Within The Moment



Within the moment

The shadow that follows close behind
a silent echo from another time,
speechless words fall from the sky
within the moment of you and I.

Fragments still remain
within teardrops and falling rain,
a remembered smile brings peace to this day
the light of tomorrow guides the way.

A shooting star cuts across the night
a glimmer of you in the flash of light,
speechless words fall from the sky
within the moment of you and I.

 

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kkirkwood commented on Within The Moment

05-14-2013

the style and rhythm is very good I truly picture the scene

Lazarus commented on Within The Moment

05-11-2013

I can relate to this.Weighty,pulsing intermittent in lavish throws.

Tempestlady commented on Within The Moment

09-02-2012

Funny how a thing can remind you of a place which can remind you of a person which can remind you of a feeling which can bring about a smile, and a warm feeling of rememberance. That is what you wrote about right? write on .................Tempestlady

tissue commented on Within The Moment

05-20-2012

This has inspired me to write my own poem...thank you for sharing this beautiful work!

goinwest commented on Within The Moment

12-30-2011

Well done! Flowing likes the waves of the ocean...

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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