Within this Quill, manifest on the Canvas....Art

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    Within this Quill, manifest on the Canvas....Art

    Within the wiles of paint of life staining reasons sustained
    a casualty in sane movements of my pain
    I blame the early essence of shameful disdain
    thus came, poetry, a moniker of this plane...
    I like to rhyme words, such a scattered preserve
    of tasteful, superb, ambiance that it serves
    feeding my curve in letters I nerve
    beckoning attachment to the turn of the verbs....
    I never fell in failing to prevail
    to sit amongst the greatest of minds in mental
    this sentient view of mine, then dispelled
    to the sky's hue of transcendent breath I inhaled...
    Well, this is a tale I shall tell in brail
    connecting the dots of my imagery cell
    my eyes aren't needed to see this ship sail
    for my fingers correlate to emotive trails...
    My emotional hail, my rainstorm fills the well
    cup your hands, take a sip, encompassed, you shall
    never give credit to the voids of hell
    but it's likeness of darkness can mimic me so well...
    Poetry on the flyleaf of matted wings
    each feather a regime of metaphors and similes
    highlighted or blackened with the simplest of imagery
    creating a bird that may seem the hyperbole...
    It's assonance to the mind's ear, an entity
    music to the thought obligatory to me
    I look but cannot see as I hear my empty
    vessel as I sleep the consonance of my chi...
    So laugh at me, journey through my converse
    it will not be the first time you find yourself lost
    for my transcendence is the lonely disperse
    'tis a curse I divinely embrace to immerse
    like the deluge of color flooding my universe
    the darkness that drinks all light will transverse
    in a mirror like pose of my dreamscape I search
    Poetry, my mind, my reality, my words.....

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    MalikPeterson commented on Within this Quill, manifest on the Canvas....Art

    04-24-2010

    Reading your works has become an exercise in redundancy. It has become this because you are always on point...you never miss a beat lol. So I never wonder how good it will be...I only wonder what I will have to say about it. You truly are a talented writer and I believe you can reach the moon if you so desire. This introspective look into the entity that is you through art and word both...paints a masterful picture in a way in which you would be hard pressed to find others on the same level. You may have my shiniest kudos my friend. Peace.

    Altair

    04/24/2010

    my my, the shiniest kudos, that's what's up my friend. I really like this poem myself, glad you got a chance to read it, and for all your insightful and perceptive comment compliments. Masha'Allah

    SuSpence commented on Within this Quill, manifest on the Canvas....Art

    04-23-2010

    Awe struck, you are a true talent my friend. I should spend less time trying to read here as much as you and more time honing my poetic skills to match you lol

    Altair

    04/23/2010

    haha, well suspence you must follow your heart and do what pleases you my friend...your comment is much appreciated, for you to say you want to match me is an honor and I imagine speaks volumes about my expressions..thanks man

    dreamscape commented on Within this Quill, manifest on the Canvas....Art

    04-23-2010

    hell yes Altair!!!! this is what I have been missing, you are the best thing since..since..well you are just fantastic. This poem should be placed on a mantle for all old and new poets to indulge in. Your style is so refreshing and awe-inspiring. You are absolutely a genius of melted words and transitioning them from line to line. I cannot wait to read the others you have. And for what it is worth, I am glad you looked me up and didn't deny me the pleasure of reading your thoughts on paper. Beautiful ;-)

    Altair

    04/23/2010

    haha, why thank you dream, it is favored to see you again as well, my apologies for being hesitant in sending you a request but no matter all is behind us. I want to thank you for such a wonderful comment, you were always good with them. Don't be a stranger..it is much appreciated..

    SuperChick76 commented on Within this Quill, manifest on the Canvas....Art

    04-22-2010

    Awestruck. It just numbs all distractions and creates a lovely tale of such an expression. Poetry in its truest of forms. I'd give more of a comment, but alas, I haven't the time. Simply stated: I absolutely loved it, dear. :) Good write. Once again. As usual.

    Altair

    04/22/2010

    why thank you prodigy, so glad you could stop by and give your old friend a visit, much appreciated as usual =)

    MindNumbing commented on Within this Quill, manifest on the Canvas....Art

    04-22-2010

    I found myself tapping my foot to the beat of this, Altair... The metering is excellent and I loved your word choices throughout this piece. Awesome job!

    Altair

    04/22/2010

    Thank you MN, a poet such as yourself to give such gestured compliments is favored indeed, thank you again my new friend

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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