Without Fail

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Today I was feeling a little down and perhaps overwhelmed by life's uncontrollable's - then a good friend helped me put things into perspective, while a stranger ironically showed me that life can change in an instant and that we should be grateful for what we have.

Without Fail



When the world is dropping out from underneath me
And the sky is falling down on top of me

I don't fight the wind; still I won’t give in
There is something within me that helps me withstand the storms

I am weak alone, sensitively fragile
I always want to know the reason but often lack the understanding

Regardless of the source of sorrow and pain
Strength always finds me in the form of friends and family

I can't give up, though at times it would be an easy thing to do
For the thoughts and prayers of loved ones always helps me 
through

 

Without fail; I never fail to be reminded of all that I have!




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thecross commented on Without Fail

12-07-2010

an uplifting and positive write being gracious and grateful always helps in finding your way down a tough road, good write

NativeAmeriGirl commented on Without Fail

10-26-2010

Such a profound and eloquent write my friend, smile.....In few words you have spoken volumes my friend.....You have truly touch that very part of my hearts soul, that is left only for poetry and you have seared it with wondrous words and talent......muchas gracias for allowing me to trespass......siempre, Native

Kanicki commented on Without Fail

10-20-2010

Excellent and beautifully crafted words of wisdom and inspiring! Peace, Light and Love

GypsySoul73 commented on Without Fail

10-17-2010

Beautifully written! Your perfectly chosen words echo the fragility of your mood. I can feel it. I was there with you. I am there with you. Peace, love and light on your path always. Gypsy Soul

soulwriter

10/20/2010

It is always a warm feeling of worth for one's writing when hearing that the reader truly feels the emotion intended.

knight4696 commented on Without Fail

10-06-2010

This is definitely a face my friend! Such an inspirational poem. I really enjoy your work - write on pal! :) Ken

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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