Without Me

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    Without Me
    Without Me Without me, you will survive,
    Without me, you are not deprived,
    Without me, girls will arrive,
    Without me, you will thrive,
    Without me, you will provide,
    Your Son will need you for this ride,
    Together you will coincide.
    Without me, your rules he will abide.
    I ask you not to let this slide,
    Right the wrongs you can not hide,
    I'd say you'll be back by my side
    but I will always have my pride,
    your love for me, has been denied.

    Dedicated to John Roe

    By Heather D. Roe

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    REAlize commented on Without Me

    03-13-2009

    SO,you are letting him go.I take it this has happend before and he always comes back.It was a good poem.
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    SweetNovember commented on Without Me

    12-10-2008

    i got a little confused because it seem that you were letting this guy go so that he could be with his son but you actually want him to stay, what about this son that needs him so badly. i don't know i guess i thought that it would be more of a lost
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    Spacer commented on Without Me

    12-08-2008

    The word slide kind of ruined it for me but besides that awsome poem...(=
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    ghostt88 commented on Without Me

    12-06-2008

    I really like this poem thanks for letting me read it.
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    CdeM commented on Without Me

    12-04-2008

    Very concise in the emotional connection you're trying to help people visualize... Nicely done...
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