without you....

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    without you....

     can you imagine a rose without perfume?...

    can u imagine a day without light?...

    can u imagine a river without water?...

    that's me without you.....



    can u imagine a sunset with a next empty chair?.....

    can u imagine a beautiful raining day?...

    with nobody to who get wet?......

    that's me without you....



    can u imagine a dark night without candle light?....

    can u imagine a page book without thoughts written?...

    can u imagine a bed with empty pillow next?...

    that's me without you...


    can u imagine me.....

    without you...

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    WordSlinger commented on without you....

    06-27-2009

    How can one jump in a poem, some one,,, help me, ?? I can't take this anymore, wow this poem messed my soul up. 10 plus
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    lovewings

    07/12/2009

    thanks Wordslinger, thats was very nice on you...i love that my poem like you...!great!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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