Without You

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    This is a poem on my boyfriend René.

    Without You
    I cant live without you
    I cant breath without you
    I can only cry, not eat, and fail without you
    Cant you understand what im trying to say?
    You just ignored me and left in pain.
    You left me to cry, be miserable , and feel so ashamed
    But that all changed.
    Now you got your Karma and so did I but you know it wasn’t just a lie.
    You carried on like a heartless freak
    She pushed your buttons and you feel down the steep
    Now you fall into a heart attack for me to just sit there and laugh at
    I cant live without you
    I cant breath without you
    I can only cry, not eat, and fail without you
    You think your strong but you act a tool
    Then she lied and cheated on you
    You faced the fact that we all know was come
    As you come around to see seek the real truth
    You cry and cry
    You begged and plead
    I stand there looking like a wreck
    I took your apology and here I am saying “Don’t fuck it up again.”
    I cant live without you
    I cant breath without you
    I can only cry, not eat, and fail without you
    I cant live without you
    I cant breath without you
    I can only cry, not eat, and fail without you

    Cant you understand what im trying to say?
    You just ignored me and left in pain.
    You left me to cry, be miserable , and feel so ashamed
    But that all changed.
    Now you got your Karma and so did I but you know it wasn’t just a lie.

    You carried on like a heartless freak
    She pushed your buttons and you feel down the steep
    Now you fall into a heart attack for me to just sit there and laugh at

    I cant live without you
    I cant breath without you
    I can only cry, not eat, and fail without you

    You think your strong but you act a tool
    Then she lied and cheated on you
    You faced the fact that we all know was come
    As you come around to see seek the real truth

    You cry and cry
    You begged and plead
    I stand there looking like a wreck
    I took your apology and here I am saying “Don’t fuck it up again.”


    I cant live without you
    I cant breath without you
    I can only cry, not eat, and fail without you

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    sequelrio commented on Without You

    07-10-2010

    i hope he already changed, dear. It aches me you got wronged like this. I pray that lessons are learned and sins are forgotten. Thank you for writing so vividly that I felt it.
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