Without you

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    Poem Commentary

    My boyfriend said these things to me awhile back, we're still together. I made what he said into a poem:)

    Without you

     To live in this world, I need you.
    Without you, I'm nothing.
    I need you in my life,
    Without you in it, my world will fall apart.
    I love you, I'd do anything for you
    Without you, i'd rather die.
    I'd run forever to see you,
    I'd take a bullet for you in a heart beat.
    I need you cause baby i can't live without you:)

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    Ninjaboy commented on Without you

    02-18-2011

    absoluetly wonderful, thats what i have to say, its a great write, hope to read more like these soon 10
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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