Without/Withing/War Within

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not sure about the last part since i repeated myself. but then again i wrote these four years ago. :)

Without/Withing/War Within

"Without"

Without the love of you heart,
WIthout the life to live,
Without memories worth remembering,
Without friendships worth saving,
Without it all your nothing.

"Within"

Within the shadows of a lost life,
Within the memory of that lost love,
Within the body and heart lies a broken soul,
That sleeps in a body troubled
Within a War.

"War Within"

Together love and hate rage inside me,
A war rages within me,
Between love and hate.
The war that destroys lives
Could destroy something within.
Because of the war within,
I lost something dear to me...
My soul.

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Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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