Woman to Man

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Woman to Man

Velvet to leather. Silk to steel

Coral to rock. Ocean to sand

Sky to earth. Feather to fin

Color to gray. Woman to man


He longs for her. She desires him

Her wafting scent drifts jasmine fresh

Drawn to her as fawn to stream

Watching her, he catches his breath


Runs his hands along her smooth curves

Dew drops glisten glowing in moon

Tingling pleasure eagerly waits

His lips to hers so pouty and rouge


Their bodies touching ever so slight

She loves to tantalize and tease

Sensation of bodies becoming one

Door to her heart she gives him her keys


Valentine’s Day, 2010

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ApaqRasgirl commented on Woman to Man

08-03-2010

wow, very well written my friend. I stumbled once on one sentence but I think that was just me, not the write....lol.....I loved it.....I don't think I would be able to do my sensual writing in such short pieces....but I may try.......lol thanks for the wonderful read loves ya asha

Oblaidon

08/03/2010

No, I can see how you can stumble. The rhyming wasn't perfect, but when the words fit you have to bend a little.

LeslieMay commented on Woman to Man

06-09-2010

Sweet and sensual all in one!! I love the first stanza best, your comparisons of woman to man. Beautifully written!!

castlemist commented on Woman to Man

03-17-2010

This is a really nice poem...good work...................

Maleficent commented on Woman to Man

03-02-2010

this is a beautiful expression of love... write on! ;)

BringMeBullets commented on Woman to Man

02-25-2010

This is a pretty poem. Thank you for sharing. I like the message that lies under the surface. Very good. It reminds me of a romantic love novel. It's cute. :)

Oblaidon

03/01/2010

Thanks sweetie :)

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Oblaidon’s Poems (26)

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Title Comments
What to be 2
Pressing On 8
Born to You and Me 9
Scorched 9
Daddy’s Girl 12
In a Flash 12
Skinny Dipping 20
lf 9
Woman to Man 21
Sign of the Cross 12
Love Embraced 21
Our Biggest Threat 14
In God I Trust 10
Driving Past Graves 17
When I was a Kid. 18
Pets by our Side 8
Rocky Shores 10
A minuscule bug 14
Heart of a Poet 29
My Armor is Faith 12
For Our Troops 8
Baby Has a Name. 17
My MI 3
My Love 8
The Grace of God 13
Rhyming Poems 20