WOMEN

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  • phantom
  • LOVE HAS NO FACE, NO COLOR, AND NO SHAPE. LOVE IS WHEN TWO PEOPLES HEART COME TOGETHER AND BECOME ONE.

WOMEN

WOMEN

Women
the most beautiful creature on the planet
the way you smell
the way you walk
the way you talk
long hair, short hair
light skin, Carmel skin, and dark chocolate
i love them all

women
my favorite type
light skin, long hair, and thick thighs
talks dirty but her mouths clean
when i hit it from the back
its nice and tight
yeah that's my dream girl
i can show her my love, and give her the world

women
the life givers
some raise children all alone
because their daddy's faceless
chasing money, and bracelets
and die on the way
leaving your son all alone
with nothing to say, about his father
when he's all grown

women
go through the worst pains
i done seen my mom shed tears
cry rains
go through it all
the ups and downs
the highs and falls
to seeing her son breaking the laws

women
some aren't treated fair
the queens of this earth
but you are still not aware
the power you have over men
because for that down there
well do anything on this land

women, women , women

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purdylox commented on WOMEN

03-17-2011

interesting poem I dont think that I would agree that the only power women have over men is whats down there lololoolololol we have boobs too lolol

LadyL714 commented on WOMEN

01-29-2011

I really like this poem because it projects truth in so many ways; however, there are numerous misspelled words and the wrong tense used.

Ninjaboy commented on WOMEN

01-29-2011

hey man, great write, and its so true as well, 10 here

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

phantom’s Poems (13)

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Listsin To your Heart 4
"I Miss" 2
WOMEN 3
Struggle 12
Dear Father 23
Grandmas Cooking 23
Mark of the Beast 9
life 13
a message to all fathers 13
man who kills 5
meant to be 3
earths gift 4
a mortal with te powers of a god 3