• Confusion


    Do you ever think about me late at night
    like I seem to do about you?
    Do you ever cry your self to sleep wondering if
    they are telling you the truth?
    Do you ever think they are everything to you
    and you would be lost with out them>?
    Ever thought that once things
    change they will never be the same?
    Ever just wonder???
    Do you ever just wonder about US?
    Have you ever thought all that
    we could really be?
    Have you ever just wondered?
    Or is it just me?
    Am i the only one that
    wonders 24/7?
    Maybe i wonder to much.
    I wonder what you wonder...

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    Helios commented on Wonder.


    Oh, there is a feeling that I know well [ I think that is why I started writing poetry].

    akayakar commented on Wonder.


    A person can really do alot of wondering. Wondering is good for your brain. . it makes you wonder!

    PrettyTough commented on Wonder.


    I think this is a great example of how our mind races without when we aren't occupying it with something else.... Great use of detail conveying what the thought process is but try using more imagery on how the answers to your questions may affect you!



    Thanks :)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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