WONDER

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These are just some things that cross my mind every once in awhile, as I am sure it crosses a lot of people's mind.

WONDER

Can you see me
Can you hear me
Can you touch me
Can you feel me

Do you see my tears
Do you hear my cries
Do you touch my heart
Do you feel my pain

Am I alive
Or am I just living
When I bury this body
Do I bury my soul

Who will see me
Who will hear me
Who will touch me
Who will feel me

Will I come back
Will I be gone forever
Will I roam in the heavens
Will I burn in hell

Is there a heaven
Is there a hell
Is there life after death
Is there death after life.




                                                Chrios
                                      Nov, 23, 2009



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Helios commented on WONDER

11-24-2009

Very modern and free...continue writing and express yourself

Rhymer commented on WONDER

11-23-2009

Excellent write, very imaginative and above all I enjoyed reading

Chrios

11/24/2009

Thank-you so much. I also enjoy your writings very much.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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