Wondering

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    Wondering

    As I watch from afar everyday,
    I wonder what it would be like,
    To trade places with her,
    To be in his arms,
    To see his beautiful eyes,
    And just stay there for hours,
    Smiling at each other,
    And then sweetly we embrace,
    What I'd do to have him to myself,
    To trade with those girls he's held in his arms,
    Just for a day,
    As I watch from afar,
    Wondering,
    Does he like me too?

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    kmeadows commented on Wondering

    06-22-2009

    Sweet, I think you might want to add "ly" to sweet embrace. or the word a in front, its just sounds a bit disjointed there, but very very good. An enjoyable read.

    Twinopolis

    06/22/2009

    ty, I fixed it :)

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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