Wonderland

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  • Suffering
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  • Imagination
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  • Insanity

    Poem Commentary

    Im lacking sleep, and angery and the world and wonderland is calling to me.

    Wonderland

     Grinning I reach out,
    Pulling you in
    Whispering
    It looks like a living hell but its Wonderland
    I dragging you down with me
    A look or pure insanity
    Its a wonderland of the dead and dying
    I may not be dying now
    But on the inside I am
    Broken and beated
    Im in wonderland
    Theres no Mad hatter
    Here there is no escaping
    Wellcome to Wonderland
    The signs say
    Depression right Insanity left
    What road will you take
    I will drag you with me
    Screw it walk down the middle
    Both insanity and depression
    Where my best friends are my drawing
    Theres no room for real trust
    Wonderland

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    ShadowStealer commented on Wonderland

    11-17-2010

    A hellish wonderland... original...poetic...angsty. All the makings for a great poem!!! ShadowStealer
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    DarkDreams commented on Wonderland

    10-27-2010

    This is very good, A wonderland of Depression and Insanity, I love it. Good Wright, keep it up. (:
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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