Words Unwritten

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    Words Unsaid and unwritten until now

    Words Unwritten

    A door mat
    Is that all I am?
    Taunts thrown at me
    Careless to my silent tears
    An inkblot on a black page
    A burden
    A problem thats unwanted
    unknown as a friend
    Unknown as a person
    Others treating me as unwanted dog
    My heart has been broken
    Yet i can still find the strenght to Love
    To forgive and I try to step forward
    Words once unwritten
    Now i shall shout them to the world
    Door mat am i no more.
    Broken indeed
    But People never forsaw the hidden dangers in my word
    Laced with daggers and ice
    only a whisper at the time
    "Watch who you mess with they just might strike when you least expect."
    It sounds like a joke coming from the girl who always hid
    I will hide no longer
    I wasted to many years hiding
    7 long years
    It was all
    7 years of words unwritten

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    ShadowStealer commented on Words Unwritten

    11-17-2010

    Wow.... I have a feeling my favorite poems are going to be flooded now. You are an amazing writer! I hope you don't feel like a doormat. ShadowStealer
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    Kanicki commented on Words Unwritten

    11-17-2010

    Keep writing the words precious; and remember you are not a door mat you are a dream girl. Peace and light...
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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