work left undone

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    • marxred
    • Just completed my new collection of poems, "Time Machine", a collections of Rock Ballads to set your own music to.

    work left undone

    i live to work, i work to live
    i write some songs
    that's all i give
    to all the opaque angles that i've seen
    some dressed in blue
    the others in green

    i wrote a book of nursery rhymes
    hid a face
    concealed the crimes
    that plague us, old and new
    as she stands in glory
    without a clue

    so lift up your glass
    my merry ones
    to those who have lived
    and their work is done

    her beauty gives her a lonely heart
    dressed in green
    with no where to start
    in a world that values virtue true
    as long as it is
    memories of you

    it is another smokey night
    she says it's ok
    but it ain't right
    to follow a path without a glass
    containing a drop
    of jagged tenderness

    lift your glasses
    my tender ones
    salute those bedside angels
    whose work is done

    i wrote in dust with a lamp of tears
    limping softly
    through her fears
    that fill the sky and heal my flesh
    as you hate and love
    and pass the test

    you wore a dress of basic blue
    and a locket
    that mentioned me and you
    but it goes no where on this cloudy night
    stung full of love
    that's winning the fight

    lift up your glass
    my little ones
    to nursery rhymes
    and the work left undone

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    SavVySam commented on work left undone

    11-09-2009

    This is one of those pieces that although it seems straight forward requires so many re-reads to get it all! Very contemporary, and as always you leave me thinking!

    marxred

    11/13/2009

    thank you sam for your compliment and comments. yeah, there is one, two, three or more characters here....i am surprised by it all too. hahaha. but that is the best way to feel about a poem, i believe.

    marxred

    11/13/2009

    thank you sam for your compliment and comments. yeah, there is one, two, three or more characters here....i am surprised by it all too. hahaha. but that is the best way to feel about a poem, i believe.

    marxred

    11/13/2009

    thank you sam for your compliment and comments. yeah, there is one, two, three or more characters here....i am surprised by it all too. hahaha. but that is the best way to feel about a poem, i believe.

    marxred

    11/13/2009

    yikes, sorry for all the repeat replies....lol.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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