Work

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    Work

    Having a job we can appreciate
    While others unfortunately await
    Using our imagination to create
    Considering the needy, so let us donate
    Working long hours every day
    Some complete their eight
    Others rather stay late
    Wondering if the place you chose is fate
    The boss saying you're doing great
    Others stating the opposite, because they hate
    Ambitiously working, there's no time to procrastinate
    Seeking success at a steady rate
    We all can relate
    Lets keep our focus straight

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    Hampton commented on Work

    01-05-2011

    Work? What more is there to be said. Nicely done........Hampton
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    blueberry

    01/05/2011

    Thank you Hampton for taking your time to read and comment. I appreciate it.

    optimistic commented on Work

    12-07-2010

    Needed that onw work can be a battle and very good poem that everyone can relate to
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    blueberry

    12/17/2010

    Thanks for reading and commenting.

    Luwonda commented on Work

    12-03-2010

    Interesting! I truly like this poem because it talks about a practical subject, work. A common trait everyday.
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    blueberry

    12/05/2010

    Thanks for taking your time to read and comment it. I appreciate it.

    carynontherhine commented on Work

    11-12-2010

    Most definitely can relate. I am sure most can. Yes, this race we enter into on a daily basis. I felt like a mouse in a cage running around constantly and with doing it every day, it felt as though life was work and then cramming everything into two days and then starting all over again. I love your style of this write. Its realistic and your talent comes through its lines. Especially the line wondering if the place you chose is fate. Who knows, right? Love it!! Hugz
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    blueberry

    11/14/2010

    Thank you so much!! I appreciate your comments alot.

    kdarcy commented on Work

    10-21-2010

    A very interesting take on having a job, doin whats right and being happy/thankful about it. Work, a necessary evil with both good and bad. Nice write, be well k
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    blueberry

    10/21/2010

    Thanks for reading this one and commenting on it. I wish you the best too.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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