Working Mother


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it's hard out there....

Working Mother

I am a working mother
Even though my kids don't have their father
I feel like were going to make it
GOD's got us covered
Everyday We have food to eat and
Every night we have somewhere to sleep
I thank the LORD for my everyday things
For being able to wake up and be next to my kids
Lord, I cant thank you for everything you've done
Since I was born you put breath in my lungs
I'm here on earth
Smiling, Laughing, Having fun
Lord, I thank you for everyone
I thank you for all the times I've had
Some happy
Some sad
Even the times when I was mad
I feel more in control than before
I just sit back and watch the show
I don't get angry anymore
I love me more
I can forgive more easily
Thank you LORD.

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charles52 commented on Working Mother


jadedoll: a wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing. Charles

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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How deep is your love? 1
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I'll Always Love You 1
Goodbye my love 1
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*My Friend* 0
Deadbeat Dad of Mine 0
The covenant 0
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Peace like a river 1
More than a savoir 1
Don't eat the forbidden fruit! 2