Would you still leave me?

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  • Mandi
  • I am here, heart in hand, ready to share time and poems ith anyone who will give me the time in their day.

Poem Commentary

For a good friend.

Would you still leave me?

Worried that you will leave me.
Even if I said I'd miss you

Would you still leave me?

Even if I would
Promised not to cry?

Would you still leave me?

Even if I said I won't
Be whole without you.

Would you still leave me?

Even if I would be quiet
When Even if I work at being  smarter.

Would you still leave me?

I have come to look
forward to our banter.

Would you still leave me?

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eddie14 commented on Would you still leave me?

11-16-2011

wow this is a very nice i like the way you ask the profound question great work please I have added two new poems to my site please read

Mandi

12/04/2011

okay eddie thank you sorry I havre been gone so long I will try to read your poems

StandingBear commented on Would you still leave me?

11-09-2011

A fantastic work you've crafted pertaining to friendship. A great talent you are. Great write.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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Incapacitated 2
Heaven 0
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ALL MY LIFE 0
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Sometimes We Should Listen to Friends 1
Destiny 1
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Search On 1
THE FALLEN 1
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The Garden 4
HERE I GO AGAIN 0
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A Little White Lie 3
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The Wheezy, Sneezy Wabbits 2
Into the Azure Blue Sky (original) 1
Ode to a Grecian.... ahh, I mean, to Diet Orange Crush 3
Life Goes On 3
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In One Fell Swoop... 6
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That's the Story of My Life 4
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I Am She 7
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Silence of the Lambs 5
Rise Up From Slumber 10
Conversion 3
Shades of Kevin 8
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Tell Me Little Baby what do you see? 9
My Last Everything 17
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Letter To An Unnamed Lover 7
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Reflections 6
Just One of Those Days 3
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