Would you still leave me?

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  • Mandi
  • I am here, heart in hand, ready to share time and poems ith anyone who will give me the time in their day.

Poem Commentary

For a good friend.

Would you still leave me?

Worried that you will leave me.
Even if I said I'd miss you

Would you still leave me?

Even if I would
Promised not to cry?

Would you still leave me?

Even if I said I won't
Be whole without you.

Would you still leave me?

Even if I would be quiet
When Even if I work at being  smarter.

Would you still leave me?

I have come to look
forward to our banter.

Would you still leave me?

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eddie14 commented on Would you still leave me?

11-16-2011

wow this is a very nice i like the way you ask the profound question great work please I have added two new poems to my site please read

Mandi

12/04/2011

okay eddie thank you sorry I havre been gone so long I will try to read your poems

StandingBear commented on Would you still leave me?

11-09-2011

A fantastic work you've crafted pertaining to friendship. A great talent you are. Great write.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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